13 years eh??
me too xD
I saw you nominated yourself - and well - i would nominate you but i have already voted lots - and with a couple of votes myself i might be taken out lols
I mean - if i ignore the c***s - you seem like a pretty sophisticated person
of course my genre is different to this - but another 13yo! i had to listen.
If i would suggest making it a bit shorter - and more melody lines or at least louder, and such;
of course i'm not really an expert - but to me, after about the middle bit - the beat seemed repetitive, and if a song is that long you have to keep the listener interested with complex - yet nice chord changes
If it was shorter you maybe get 10 ^^
well done though :)